When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
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So finally the third page of my Doujinshi^^
My english sucks so if you see any mistake pleeeease let me know it Shit I am so proud of the first pic^^ It looks just like a real manga picture o.O Prev. Page: [link] ________________________________ I don't own Sailor Moon blabla ^^ ((C) Naoko Takeuchi) |
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February 1, 2007
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“No, you just wait and see. I’ll show you what a shorty can do!”
The only English mistake I caught was in the last panel, where Usagi says "Why I haven't told you this before?" There could be two ways to correct it, depending on what you want her meaning to be.
The first way to change it would be for it to read "Why haven't I told you this before?", switching the positions of the "I" and "haven't". This makes it sound like she's talking to him there, or like he's nearby.
The other way is to change more words and have it read "Why didn't I tell you that before?" and this statement makes it sound like she's regretting not having told him before he left.
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FAQ #56: How can I get people to notice my art?
Masaya haters DON'T click here!
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“No, you just wait and see. I’ll show you what a shorty can do!”
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I ask for so little. Just fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave.
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and where are the grammatical mistakes?
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